The Shoe Life

The Shoe Life
Learning Intention: My class is learning to right recounts. Success Criteria: Title -orientation who what when were why the events in the middle . the ending needs vocabulary that show the time that has passed and describes the ending

It was a dark room a small dark room. I look over to see my twin asleep these  things i thought were white baked beans they were soft as they brushed against my fabric.. Then out of now were a boom crack the dark room became not very dark room. I had not seen the sunlight before so I used my lace to rub my eyes. I was dazed at what was standing in front of me. I said to myself is this a white headed rhinoceros  or a smelly human. I easily thought a smelly human I quickly grabbed my twin and pulled me towards her.

She was awake now and she said to me hide we could under the white beans and hide then we heard a man saying ‘’where are you’’ as he put his hands into  the box I thought was a room. Out of nowhere I got a tug on my back so I moved more towards my sister then he grabbed me and held me in his stinking hands ewwww he placed me on a shelf  by other shoes I looked down to see he was picking up my sister and poting her down below me in a box. I didn't say anything because I was scared they would hurt me or my sister. I looked around the room there were bags shoes surf boards  hats I could see the man leaving this ere that i was in I don't know what to call it I have never really bean somewhere like this before.

The man left and I heard gibbering I thought there was more people in the room but it was just the other shoes. They were like yelling something I couldn't her it properly so I gust ignored it I went of to sleep when I woke back up and the man was back and there were other people there there was a boy a little boy that came over to where I was he looked at me then poked the shouse beside me. I stayed still hoping he wouldn't touch me. The boy and his parent left soon after it was almost time for the man to leave the room when someone walked through the door a lady a very fancy lady she came over to the shelf that I was on and picked me up she put me down and grabbed the box that my sister was in and took the box to the man at the table the man walked over to me and grabbed me he threw me into the box and pot the lid on. I could her the man and lady talking about something like money I have  always wonder what that means  then the box shook and I her a very loud bang but like a door shutting bag.

We were in a vehicle or something like that we drove for a while till we stopped when we stopped the box that me and my sister were in fellon to the ground they lady grabbed the box and took us to a house a very big house. She thought the box onto a soft surface. She took the lid of the box and pot me and me and my sister on those yukky feat.she left us on for some reason we walked around the house and ended at the front door we walked out to a really big vehicle, we hopped into the vehicle and we drove. It only took a few minutes to get where we were going I didn't know were we were going because the lady didn’t say anything the whole ride.we hopped out of the vehicle and walked into a house.

We walked in and the lady had some sort of sticky substance fall on her. The lady yelled she walked outside and a car drove past and splashed her with mud the lady started to sob she yelled a word that sounded like taxi or taxi I'm to shout but we hoped it to the taxi or taxi I'm still not shot we got to the house and the lady ran inside she took us of her feet and through us at the door she ran up stairs. A long while later the lady came back she grabbed us and threw us out side. We were in the mud lying there I tried to move but I couldn't I fell asleep. When I was asleep I  heard a older lady come buy saying something about fixing us or something like that I thought I was hallucinating so I thought it was fake. I woke up the next morning I was in pain, I don't now what from I didn't open my eyes yet but I could feel a sharp egh against my leather. I quickly opened my eyes to see a old lady working on my sister gluing her broken ofo pieces together. She stood me and my sister up then she put us in a box and wrapped the box up. We were in that box for a few days. One day I heard a noise and then the box started shaking the box lid was ripped of  I looked up and a lady a very pretty lady she took me out and pot me on her foot she took care of me and my sister from that day on and never hurt us.the end

Alyssa